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Traces of Me
Contributed by
xtcslilangel
on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:16:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Why is your face disappearing?
Why are you fading away?
Why is there mist in the clearing?
Can you not hear what I say?
Love you or not I am crying,
Tears do such damage to souls.
Falling to pieces and trying,
Take over the fear that controls.
Sticks and stones break bones often,
Brittle debris wears and falls.
A smear in the silence revolving,
Ignoring the suffering calls.
I plead with such pity, I beg you,
Let go of your soul, set it free.
Release all the suffer within you,
Set sail through traces of me.
Copyright ©
xtcslilangel
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2005-03-23 02:16:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Traces of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:50:35 AM AEST (User
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This is an outstanding piece of poetry. So well written and expressed. I loved the flow of the verses and the excellent use of language.
Well done.
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Sue |
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Re: Traces of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:40:23 AM AEST (User
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a very well written piece it deserved to be published
pix xx |
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Re: Traces of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by RomanticSoul on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:59:26 AM AEST (User
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This poem is touching, I can relate to your feelings here. Well done! |
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Re: Traces of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:44:36 AM AEST (User
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I agree w/ mina-1, it is outstanding, Great job. |
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