|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Is She Alone
Contributed by
mini_mexico
on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:07:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
|
The light within her weakens,
she see's no need to live.
She wanders for affection,
but no one seems to give.
She travels an overwhelming road,
to which there is no end.
She wants to be with others,
but with them she cannot blend.
She wilts away in silence,
and no one seems to care.
She wants someone to help her,
but she thinks that no one's there.
Then she see's a growing light,
and a hand comes from the sky.
He grabs her hand and helps her,
and teaches her to fly.
Copyright ©
mini_mexico
... [
2005-03-23 02:07:19]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Is She Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jessicahodge on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:43:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I really enjoyed your poem. It is something that I can relate to. For i fell in love and he taught me how to fly. |
|
|
Re: Is She Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:47:29 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A masterpeice of beauty.
huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: Is She Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:54:55 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A truly inspiring poem. A beautiful master piece.
Hugs,
Sue |
|
|
Re: Is She Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:00:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Truely, God alone can set us free.
A beautiful and inspiring write this is... simple and powerful at the same time.
What a wonderful note it ends on- filled with new hope and promise.
Well done.
|
|
|
Re: Is She Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:25:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I think this is a beautiful poem, it has touched and inspired me.......... |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
