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A Quiet Day
Contributed by
JasTrask_22
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:10:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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snow glistening on the ground, sun shinging on the bark...
everythings peaceful but the sound ..
roaring up in the sky..
high above us, not a cloud we spy..
everythings soft and quiet..
we see our breath as we exhale.
we want to hold onto this moment..
and make it never fail.
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2005-03-22 23:10:04]
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Re: A Quiet Day
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 12:18:16 AM AEST
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A lovely ode to that moment which comes sometimes, when we are surrounded by peace and beauty that makes everything worthwhile.
I liked the first line a lot.
And overall too, well-written.
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Re: A Quiet Day
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:14:30 AM AEST
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Short, simple and sweet. Beautifully written.
a pleasant read.
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