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sitting alone
Contributed by
sexypantz
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:36:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So there I was, sitting alone
as I listened to the dial tone.
As tears kept running down my cheek,
I wondered how you could make me so weak.
It was all of the sudden, out of the blue
what now is one, used to be two.
You didn't even say goodbye
You hung up the the phone when i started to cry.
How could you do this? You knew that i cared.
But the love I had wouldn't be shared
If you knew that I would begin to obsess,
then why would you put yourself in to this mess?
I trusted you with all my heart
Even though we started to grow apart.
I wanted to give you all that I had,
but I guess you didn't want me that bad.
I slowly layed down and hung up the phone,
then I drifted off in a different zone.
I woke up later from a bright sunbeam,
and realized it was all a dream.
But at the end of the day, I was about to rejoice
then I picked up the phone and I heard your voice.
My heart sank as I started to cry,
then you hung up the phone without saying goodbye.
So there I was, sitting alone
as I listened to the dial tone.
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Re: sitting alone
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by moon_light on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:42:58 PM AEST
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you realy hit the fealings of a break up. i love how you broght it into a perfict cercal keep it up
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Re: sitting alone
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:52:46 PM AEST
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I hear ya, this is a very good write even tho sad but then breaking up is most of the time sad.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: sitting alone
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by HellsLibrarian on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:23:22 PM AEST
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| very smooth. I've always admired the talent to keep a rhyme scheme and tell a story. |
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