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Fate And Destiny
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 05:56:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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From the moment that I saw you,
The world around me fell.
As we met my heart soared high,
And brought me back from hell.
Your eyes seemed to search my soul,
While curing all my inner pain.
Just in those few seconds,
You washed away the rain.
In that moment I knew,
That we were meant to be.
No one else, just you and I,
Always and forever, you and me.
We shared our lives together,
You were my dream come true.
You were there through it all,
Holding my hand while I suffered through.
You seemed to ease my hurt,
And you wiped away my tears.
You kept me safe from aching,
And fought away my fears.
Ive never met,
Someone who's completed me so.
I hoped that we would last forever,
And that you'd never have to go.
Well fate stepped into play,
And you slipped further away from me.
Its not supposed to be this way,
This isnt how its meant to be.
Were you not my destined future?
Were you not my planned soulmate?
This hell just isnt fair,
Screw this thing called "fate."
The seas roared with my anger,
As the earth began to shake.
I hope this world feels my wrath,
I hope it suffers my every ache.
This life took away,
The one thing that made me wake eachday.
But now its gone,
So whats the point if I die or stay?
The tears now never stop,
All the pain lingers on.
All because fate screwed up,
And made my life all wrong.
God dangles him in front of me,
Time and time again.
He rips me open once more,
Everytime I begin to mend.
Teasing and taunting me,
As I break down and cry.
Just already hand me the knife,
And watch me as I die!
I might as well just kill myself,
Because my life has gone away.
I cant believe that desinty,
Makes me hurt this way.
You could maul my flesh to shards,
And the pain still cant compare.
Im screaming in torment,
And you've yet to even care.
I just dont understand,
Why we couldnt just be.
Why the hell did you ruin it all?
I hate you destiny!
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Pats4eva7
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Re: Fate And Destiny
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:05:52 PM AEST
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And brought me back from hell.
The tears now never stop,
All the pain lingers on.
All because fate screwed up,
And made my life all wrong.
God dangles him in front of me,
Time and time again.
He rips me open once more,
Everytime I begin to mend.
good write...great finish...nice job at rhyming and keeping the forum...
though i'm not one for love poems, this is pretty good...
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