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Blood
Contributed by
Urizen
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:36:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Exposed skin,
An expression of pain,
She loves the freedom but she hates to feel this way,
The sound of slicing, tearing flesh,
A release of pressure,
She senses death,
It all gets too much some days she says,
I need an escape, somewhere I can vent,
Cause no-one listens, they all like to judge,
I need this release,
I need the blood.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-03-22 16:36:03]
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Re: Blood
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by b_rand on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:37:49 PM AEST
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| gruesome lol ... very well written. good point as well |
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Re: Blood
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:44:13 PM AEST
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| VERY powerful keep it up...*Babi |
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Re: Blood
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by aidious on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:08:21 PM AEST
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I was in a clothes shop today and the girl who served me had a shirt with really baggy sleeves on. This meant you could see her arms and she was covered in scars, clearly as a result of selm-harming. It's terribly sad that some people are in so much emotional pain, that the physical pain caused by slashing their wrists is some sort of comfort.
I can never imagine being that upset. Maybe it's not because I'm confident in my emotional strength but because i'm incredibly squeemish!
Great poem |
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