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Let me be there for you...
Contributed by
searchingforlove
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:17:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You're trying too hard to shut the door
To shut yourself away from this world
Away from me...
I can peek right into your soul
Even in those dark little crevices
So jut stop...and let me in
Let me be there for you
Let me share your pain and sorrow
Let me be the one to wipe your tears
Don't you understand?
I am your friend
I care about you
So let me be the one you lean upon...
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2005-03-22 15:17:05]
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Re: Let me be there for you...
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:25:53 PM AEST
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| Very good. I feel sure that we can all relate. Keep it up |
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Re: Let me be there for you...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:54:50 PM AEST
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| Yes I agree we can all relate to your poem, sometimes peole do try to shut it out and sometimes people do not want to believe what they are told. I Hope you understand what that means. |
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Re: Let me be there for you...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:59:09 PM AEST
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A very moving write. Its beautiful and full of both hope and longing to help, I love it. A very well written, touching dedication. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
- Becca |
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