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His Heaven
Contributed by
Zake202
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:03:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beneath it all,
Under these shadowed eyes.
Mirrored visions of bliss,
Painting the sky passion.
The seas of tears,
The grasses of growth.
The strong to step upon;
His loving hope.
A perfect to live in,
A perfect to breathe for,
Never dying,
She is his heaven.
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Zake202
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Re: His Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:57:43 PM AEST
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| I hope your love lasts, sometimes it might not, you can put all of your hope into a relationship and sometimes it just does not work out. |
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Re: His Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:00:47 PM AEST
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A beautiful write. This is so touching, I hope things remain smooth between you. Very moving.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: His Heaven
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:24:40 PM AEST
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I love you too peter, always and forever.
=) *hugs* You're my world and so much more. |
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Re: His Heaven
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:12:43 PM AEST
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The imagery and passion was alive in your poem.
May this love you have found continue to inspire you to write such lovely poetry.
Kie |
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Re: His Heaven
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:45:36 AM AEST
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Elegant, simple, with lasting beauty. Nicely done!
Laurie |
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