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My Heart Is Not As Easy
Contributed by
aidious
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:28:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart is not as easy
as your heart seems to be
Up until quite recently
your heart belonged to me
But in the time from then til now
of which theres not a lot
Your heart has shifted once again
it someone else has got
Not that I am bitter
as if your heart were true
You wouldn't give your love away
as quickly as you do
My heart is mine in love and out
for that great love I'll reap
My heart is real, unlike yours which
is easy and is cheap
Copyright ©
aidious
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2005-03-22 14:28:55]
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Re: My Heart Is Not As Easy
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:35:58 PM AEST
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| You lied to us in the subtitle. You are very good at writing poetry. An absolutely great write that expresses your emotions so well. Keep the coming |
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Re: My Heart Is Not As Easy
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by DirkDrab on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:55:06 PM AEST
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I agree. Don't stop expressing yourself. You have a great gift.
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Re: My Heart Is Not As Easy
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by EmoDCgirl36 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:18:34 PM AEST
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| If you think it's bad go right ahead. But I find it wonderful. |
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Re: My Heart Is Not As Easy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:12:57 PM AEST
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Aye I agree, this is an outstanding poem. Its written to perfection, flows smoothly and damn but I love it. I especially love how you drew it to an end, so deep, emotional and insightful. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: My Heart Is Not As Easy
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by Urizen on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:45:11 PM AEST
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| Good Poem, and one which has alot of meaning. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to these feelings, I certainly can. Thank you for sharing, keep writing. xx |
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Re: My Heart Is Not As Easy
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by aidious on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 05:12:40 PM AEST
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OH NO! How embarrassing - I wrote 'sought' instead of 'sort'. :(
But thank you for your lovely comments. :) |
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Re: My Heart Is Not As Easy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:27:22 PM AEST
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| I loved the last stanza! You're great at writing poetry! I enjoyed this piece so much. I really hope you continue writing and sharing with us, because I'll keep reading. Take Care. :-) |
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