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See Me
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:35:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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broken and bleeding
do you even see me?
my tears bring you laughter
as you further break me
knifes could not cut more deeper than this
in all this turmoil death would be simply bliss
so please I beg make it quick
show me the end, I'm ready for it
blissful eternity endless dark
no light to speak of in this midnight lark
show me absolotion send me to my gods
death would not have so much fog
Yet mercy you do not know
when your eyes scourn me so
so i'll lay here crying still
waiting for you to see me
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Re: See Me
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:38:03 PM AEST
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great flow, the words fitted together perfectly, great write
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Re: See Me
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by EmoDCgirl36 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:16:53 PM AEST
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| This is really good. It makes me think of my current situation.... |
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