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I Love TheM Both
Contributed by
concrete_rose
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:53:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I love them both, can't have them both.
It's tearing me apart!
My former joy and present boy:
Both have got my heart.
I have to choose, so I must lose
Someone I really love.
It feels like dirt that I must hurt
A guy that I dream of.
Why this must be I cannot see;
I only know I must.
Each might endure, for I am sure
That this is love, not lust.
I weep and wail to no avail;
I can't say no to either.
But if I can't tell what I want,
Could that mean I want neither?
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Re: I Love TheM Both
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:00:15 AM AEST
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Wow, this is amazing.
Your words work so well together and the flow is near perfect.
I adore the last stanza, it made me think.
I hope things work out for you soon.
Great write,
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Re: I Love TheM Both
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:10:48 AM AEST
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NIce job, the R&R are smooth without losing the punch of your message. While I don't envy you your choice, I have to think that too much love can't be all bad.
nice one -
mj |
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Re: I Love TheM Both
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:12:11 AM AEST
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Torn i feel your anguish it is never easy
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