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End of Naivety

Contributed by Sonic_phoenix on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:44:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

love makes and breaks, mars and changes
we promise forever
what we get is tomorrow

i have loved and i have lost
naivety promises
have all been broken or dropped

i gave first love second chances
i let my heart open to romances
and then cried when only hatred came in

he broke my heart and my soul
but i've moved on
you should too

but you try your love over
even after he had strayed
hoping always that he will have changed

i know your naivety
i've walked that road before
people don't change unless they really want to

so my friend i love you well
i will support you
but this i say as well

do not forget your pain for it may return
remeber naivety should only be short term
and know i'll be here whatever the end

i lost my naivety
a harsh lesson indeed
but know now that i am free

Copyright © Sonic_phoenix ... [ 2005-03-22 09:44:52]
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Re: End of Naivety (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:53:55 AM AEST
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Hmmm, do you mean 'marks' in the first line?

I like this, but you could do with some capitals.

That's the only think I could see though, everything else was really great.

Good write,
Phil xxx

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