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The Poetic Rantings of Your Average Depressed Lover
Contributed by
high_on_duct_tape
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:40:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wake up
And cry
Prepare for another day
Of this worthless existance
I get through it
Untill I see your face
Then the pain hits
Cutting my heart like a knife
A knife
A cut
My blood
Easing my pain
The pain
Intolerable
My love for you
No better
But you?
How do you feel?
Do you even notice me?
Or am I just another, crazy person
A crazy person
More insane each day
As you drive me mad
Without even noticing it
Will you ever know?
I wish I knew
Do you want to know?
I may tell you anyway
Or I may not
As I think
You leave
You're gone
And I go home
Return to my silent depression
And I cry
Tomorrow it will be that much harder
To get up
To cry
To see you
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Re: The Poetic Rantings of Your Average Depressed Lover
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:48:11 AM AEST
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Who left you thats goo poetry
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Re: The Poetic Rantings of Your Average Depressed Lover
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:09:58 AM AEST
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such sadness well expressed
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Re: The Poetic Rantings of Your Average Depressed Lover
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:13:02 AM AEST
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The title was terrific, and did fit well with your poem. I think you carried this off well, and still were able to give it life.
Nice job-
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Re: The Poetic Rantings of Your Average Depressed Lover
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:20:22 AM AEST
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I like this, it's really doo.
It seems to almost 'speed up' in places, then slow down again. I really love that.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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