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I HATE THE WAY??????????
Contributed by
dreaming-of-your-love
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:25:39 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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i hate the way you look at me
i hate the way you make me cry
i hate the way you tell me you wanted me to die
i hate you so much it hurts in side
i hate the way your eyes cry
when ever i say good bye
i hate it so much i wish myself to die
i hate it when you smile and say its ok
i hate you and that will never change!!!!
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Re: I HATE THE WAY??????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by OnAngelswings on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:07:24 AM AEST (User
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thi isn't bad at all...but sounds like you care not hate...lol...funny how that works...Shari
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Re: I HATE THE WAY??????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by high_on_duct_tape on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:13:43 AM AEST (User
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It sounds to me like you hate because you care... very strong feelings here. i like it! |
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Re: I HATE THE WAY??????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by thumper on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:40:54 AM AEST (User
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Ok now you got me wondering!!?!! HMMMMM! I'm going to have to find out who this person is. Although, as long as it's not me, I'm not worried! lol Also, I agree with those before me, I think you care more than you want to admit. I don't usually care for repetition, but it works well on this poem. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
(here's one to worry about :o} )
Your number 1 fan, heh heh heh
Thumps ; o) |
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