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My Suicidal Friend
Contributed by
Kuro_Mirai
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My suicidal friend
You're so ready to meet the end
Life is a lot harder for you
It's hard to see what you go through
A cut on your wrist
A gash on your fist
You counted your seemingly countless tears
Through all of your painful years
Through life, you always have it the worst
Your anger has built up, and it's about to burst
You want it to end, for it to fade
Thats the relief from a blood-drenched blade
A black storm cloud always above your head
Inside yourself, you appear to be dead
You want to run, to go and hide
But your stuck on Life's roller coaster ride
Since you were small you felt so blind
Someone who loves you is hard to find
You're always ready to meet the end
I'll miss you when you go, my friend
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Kuro_Mirai
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2005-03-22 04:45:53]
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Re: My Suicidal Friend
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:14:40 AM AEST
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i like this very much...in fact i feel like i wrote it cuz i just feel the same way
i loved ur word use and visual pictures
i enjoyed reading this...well done
hope |
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Re: My Suicidal Friend
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:54:42 AM AEST
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| good write. I agree that it gives off good pictures, well, descriptie pictures. Tho I have to say, i relate more to ur friend than u... I hope that's just me |
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Re: My Suicidal Friend
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:55:34 PM AEST
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| Great Job Kuro! I liked it alot! Sometime you got to tell me who that friend is. Ok? |
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