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NO PAIN, NO GAIN
Contributed by
brains_of_the_insane
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:29:58 AM in AEST
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I've lost the sparkle in my eyes
my heart feels like a stone
they say your spirit never dies
well mine left me alone...
I cry for help! Nothing to gain
life's hurting me you see
my minds made up, I scream in pain
I don't want to be here anymore
It's all the @#$%ing same.
I take the knife and slide it across my wrists
I am tried of playing this game
I am tired of life's twists.
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Re: NO PAIN, NO GAIN
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by xtremcalibur on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:33:07 AM AEST
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| Well put and gut wrenching. I felt the pain in your write. Thank you for sharing a sensitive poem. |
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Re: NO PAIN, NO GAIN
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:15:16 AM AEST
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Well I can't say I like the write cause it's so very sad. I know these things do happen and sometimes it's too late.
What I will say is Jesus luvs u as much as he does me and I pray this is only venting.
From this nite u will be in my heart-n-prayers,
emy
p.m. any time. |
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Re: NO PAIN, NO GAIN
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by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:26:15 AM AEST
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| the poem tells me of someone who has learned one of lifes most difficult lessons and who has made some concious decisions to overcome. one way or another we all come unto the light... although from personal experience the Light of Earth is pretty amazing...... |
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Re: NO PAIN, NO GAIN
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:23:12 AM AEST
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This is good, painful, but not like your average cutting poem.
The flow is well, and your words are good together.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: NO PAIN, NO GAIN
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 05:34:41 PM AEST
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short and sweet and very well written. I love the first 4 lines the most. They're really catchy.
--Kara |
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