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WAR
Contributed by
brains_of_the_insane
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:20:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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silent shreeks.
another soul condemned.
darkness and death.
black masks and men.
cold white rooms.
and poisonous gases
carless destruction of the masses.
soldiers.
dead bodies.
impending doom.
the reaper pays a vist
to ...every....
....single....
...room....
heartless dictators.
needle blind eyes.
innocent souls
crawl through the skies.
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2005-03-22 02:20:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: WAR
(User Rating: 1 ) by quill_and_ink on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:35:00 AM AEST (User
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Wow, this is a really great write! It really depicts the horror of war. Well done!!! |
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Re: WAR
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:39:44 AM AEST (User
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right between the eyes... like shock treatment for the masses.... i like that.... |
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