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Gimpd
Contributed by
gimpie
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 01:30:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tears of red
Blood runs thin
Anger rises
Here we go again,
Doors slam shut
Holes in walls
Life's too much
I start to fall,
People fight
Who should be kool
I see **** crumble
And feel the fool,
I hate to cry
I hate to bleed
But sometimes both
Are meant to be,
The blackest sky
The deepest red
Both seen and felt
Within my head,
What I want
And what I see
Pain immense
Just set it free,
Let it rain
And let it die
Water washes
Tears now dry.
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gimpie
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2005-03-22 01:30:03]
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Re: Gimpd
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 01:35:32 AM AEST
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Such a masterpeice!
I have no clue who ur but you've written a truth so bold that it will live in history long after we leave this planet.
It's sortta written like the parables of old which to me are jus leaving wisdom for the genreration to come as well as the present.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Gimpd
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:51:05 AM AEST
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Gimpie
You are unreal so talented.Bless you. You have so much to offer.I have to take time and read one more before I go on to comment on someone else.Post more.
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