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CONFLICTED...
Contributed by
joe-joe
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Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Conflicted...
Twisted and turned into a million directions, unable to provide the necessities of life,
No strength or energy to overcome my internal strife,
Just about to go over a dangerous cliff, struggling in the midst of chaos, my mind on edge,
Barely hanging on by a thread, hanging by my fingertips upon a very fragile ledge...
Constricted...
Headaches galore, tied in a bundle of knots, feels like my brain will explode, filled with bleeding blood clots.
Churning...
My heart and mind infighting, agitated and whisked by madness in the belly of my soul, in a desperate struggle they fight,
Wearied am I of there conflicted...might.
Unable to fine my destiny or purpose, for they have evaded my desperate search,
Trapped in wicked's snare, I weep, conflicted...as I sit upon my inopportune perch,
Torn...
Into threads, I am shredded, ragged and weather beaten, into the wind I'm scattered and by moths eaten.
Before it's too late, I strive to overcome my conflictions, no longer to be conflicted...
Overcome by love no longer convicted...
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joe-joe
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2002-12-18 22:20:00]
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Re: CONFLICTED...
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by Devlina on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:10:29 PM AEST
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| I have felt like this several times. Into threads, I am shreaded, I can think of one occasion that sticks out in my mind. It was recently, and it was for love also, but like you said love overcame! |
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Re: CONFLICTED...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:32:17 PM AEST
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Very good imagery here...
Jenni |
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Re: CONFLICTED...
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by OreO on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:43:42 AM AEST
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Wow the images this poem gives...this is deep...thanks for sharing this one it's beautifully written...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: CONFLICTED...
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by Love_letters on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 01:34:20 PM AEST
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That was wonderfully written. I hope you intend to find yourself a recording artist will buy this poem from you because this poem sounds like song lyrics. Definately a compliment!!!! I wish the best for you. Don't sell it under its true value. Seek help via the Internet and its research pages on publishing.
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: CONFLICTED...
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:41:29 PM AEST
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| well wriiten strong images i enjoyed this very much |
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