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Bright Red Shout
Contributed by
TinkerHell
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:28:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Pain leaks out
a bright red shout
dripping slowly
feeling lonely
a silent cry
a hidden lie
biting lip
tighting grip
thinking fast
make it last
without a care
give it a pair
adrenaline rush
a guilty blush
a craving wrong
it won't be long
the greatest fear
no more tears
feeling numb
thinking of them
release it all
and then I fall
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TinkerHell
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2005-03-21 23:28:25]
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Re: Bright Red Shout
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:49:48 AM AEST
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U r a very mysterious writer as your poems can have multiple meanings.
U leave the reader to deal with it how ever they persive it to bee.
Great talent as a writer is what I see.
huggs,
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Re: Bright Red Shout
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by Faust on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:55:42 AM AEST
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This is a very good, no, great poem. it seems you can write something that not only expresses how you feel, but describes how others feel aswell. it is a very amazing ability.
Eternally Punished,
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