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Don't Scare Him Away
Contributed by
sweetncaring
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Don't scare him away
I am beginning to love him so
he is good to me
as good as you would expect a boyfriend to be
he treats me like a Queen
whenever I'm around he doesn't do anything wrong
we bring out the best in one another
and we talk for hours
you don't see this
all you see is his face
looks aren't everything
it is what is inside that counts
get to know him
and you will like him as much as I do now
and maybe a little more as our relationship turns more serious.
Copyright ©
sweetncaring
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2005-03-21 23:12:00]
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Re: Don't Scare Him Away
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:45:05 PM AEST
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What a nice poem yeh u got the flow down
and it's very expressive well done . . .
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Re: Don't Scare Him Away
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:07:57 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy
did u show this to her? |
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Re: Don't Scare Him Away
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by ElliotRS on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 12:07:30 PM AEST
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| It's very out in the open there is no hidden message and I think you did a great job of telling what you felt. Very nice work! |
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