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Aching Memory
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:32:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I still dream of you,
sweet memory,
dear memory,
burned into my skull.
You know you are
my rapture and my agony.
Your love sears through my veins
killing me like arsenic.
And yet you are my life support,
elusive demise.
Cry to you for life and release.
Cry from hate and torment.
Deliver me,
decaying remedy.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
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2005-03-21 20:32:30]
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Re: Aching Memory
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by b_rand on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:44:30 PM AEST
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| great vocabulary, i loved it. it really captures what your saying. awesome job |
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Re: Aching Memory
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:23:45 PM AEST
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| Great imagery in this piece. I'm glad you were able to stop. Keep it up! |
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Re: Aching Memory
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:00:53 AM AEST
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the awesomeness is apparent greatly
lol well done! |
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Re: Aching Memory
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:09:47 AM AEST
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| That's a great choice of wording. I love the emotion you put into this poem! I can also relate to this. Keep up the good work. Jenny |
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