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Is it a lie?
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:18:48 PM in AEST
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I'm confused...
Does he love me, or is it untrue?
Does he need me, or am I being used?
Does he feel the same way as I feel about him, or does he see our relationship as turning blue?
I feel like I'm about to cry...
It seems like this is all a lie...
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Re: Is it a lie?
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:51:05 AM AEST
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there isn't much forum to it, okays on rhyming...kinda short...but not bad...
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Re: Is it a lie?
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by NorthernRick on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:39:22 AM AEST
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very good right
im can relate alot to that except im a except to a girl |
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Re: Is it a lie?
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by NorthernRick on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:39:30 AM AEST
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very good right
im can relate alot to that except im a except to a girl |
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Re: Is it a lie?
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by NorthernRick on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:39:39 AM AEST
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very good right
im can relate alot to that except im a except to a girl |
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Re: Is it a lie?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:25:30 PM AEST
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| This is good, i mean goooood, i like it, i like what you've done with the ryhme :) nice one! |
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Re: Is it a lie?
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by isis1987 on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 04:12:57 PM AEST
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| short and sweet. i like it. very nice |
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