|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Drowning
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
I can feel you
Underneath my skin
Your growing stronger
I'm only getting weaker
Your sticky hands are pulling me under
Its futile to fight
Every tear I cry
Only makes you stronger
I can't get this taste of blood,
Out of my mouth
I can't tear my eyes away
From this window
Wanting to jump out
And become one with this pavement
I can hear your happy screams
Grating against my depressive shield
You pulled me under
While I kicked, thrashed, and screamed
The chlorine burning my eyes
What can I do?
My agenda isn't one of your priorities
Can't run away
Sweat makes you stronger
Agenda driven vs. agenda destroyer
My mind longs to be set free
I'm striving for this one wish
To be granted to me
Unable to live on those
Bones you toss me
Dependant on your 'loving care'
You bring my hopes up
Then shatter them til no trace is left
I've almost drowned
My body has called it quits
These pills are kicking in,
But my silent, invisible tears
They still come down
Everything is going dark and fuzzy
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
... [
2002-12-18 20:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Noymaster on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:37:45 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| real...but im lost on the agenda part I mean what the ***** that? |
|
|
Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 04:59:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is awsome.... i feel like this sometimes... and i hope you are feeling better about this all soon... keep it up
~delusions~ |
|
|
Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by PrincessSteffy on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:23:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice write...I know how you feel sometimes. |
|
|
Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 12:05:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| excellent write, love the imagery...hopefully these feelings don't come often for you...kara |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
