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For but a moment...
Contributed by
Angelgirlprincess
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:24:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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....For but a moment
time stood still
All I could see was you
The world had disappeared
I am lost in your eyes
Emotions I've never felt
begin erupting inside
For but a moment...
....For but a moment
as time stood still
Two souls are searching
Dreaming, straining, yearning
As one to be
Looking for a sign
A reason for destinies design
For but a moment....
For but a moment
as time stood still
And I start to wonder
Why life could be this way
I can finally see
The true meaning of
"We were meant to be"
For but a moment....
Eventually in that moment, I've learned
What a lifetime failed to teach
I cant help but see
Nothing is real
Sometimes its all just a dream
The moment which transends reality is gone
And in its place
Helpless love is lost
For but a moment....
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2005-03-21 16:24:27]
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Re: For but a moment...
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by b_rand on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:33:33 PM AEST
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I really like this one. this verse:
as time stood still
Two souls are searching
Dreaming, straining, yearning
As one to be
Looking for a sign
A reason for destinies design
particularly touched me. we are all constantly in this battle, married or single. great job |
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Re: For but a moment...
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by Angelgirlprincess on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:41:37 PM AEST
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| Thanks. That happens to be my favorite verse too. I appreciate you reading it and taking the time to comment. :) |
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Re: For but a moment...
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by Ninnyfarfar on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:55:26 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem, i thought it was awesome, i agree with the others and i especially loved the second verse. Keep it up! |
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Re: For but a moment...
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:19:34 PM AEST
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This is really good. You are a great writer.
I especially love the repeated line, it doesn't make the poem annoyingly repetetive, it's just right.
I hope to read more soon.
Welcome to YPDC,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: For but a moment...
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by Angelgirlprincess on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:39:54 PM AEST
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| Wow, thanks everyone. I appreciate your feedback alot. It's nice to know that it makes sense to others too. lol. |
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Re: For but a moment...
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:11:01 PM AEST
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a beautifully well written poem. A touching and heart felt piece. I like the repetiveness.
Keep up the great work.
Hugs,
Sue |
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