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Falling Farther
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm falling farther
Screaming in disarray
I hate being the loser
I hate the biting pain
And the agony tearing deep within
If you'd look into my eyes
You might see the scenes
Replaying over and over
And the question marks
Wondering where I ***** up
These tears they won't fall
Its getting harder to sniff them back
Sitting here all alone
Just wanting to bleed,
But I'm so confused
Don't know why
I feel this way
I'm falling farther
My voice has been stripped from me
I'm falling harder
I'm amazed at the emotion I lack
I'm falling farther
These tears they won't fall
Its getting harder to sniff them back
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2002-12-18 19:40:00]
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Re: Falling Farther
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:48:34 PM AEST
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this poem has so much emotion and is really well done. Its so different from mine, and thats what makes it beautiful to me. I dont write hardly ever about personal expeiriences, but i wonder if i did, would they be like this?
great
bis spater
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Re: Falling Farther
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by Suzy on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:00:02 PM AEST
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wow your poems are all so awesome filled with so much anger and hurt....
Lasca |
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Re: Falling Farther
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:59:33 PM AEST
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This write has edge, anger , hurt, hopelessness; so much emotion. I love it and I really can relate. Take care & don't give in.
R. |
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Re: Falling Farther
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by OreO on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:05:58 AM AEST
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The only words i feel like saying here on this write is......beleive in yourself and everything will turn out in life beautifully for you..
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Re: Falling Farther
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by ashleigh4 on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 07:27:44 PM AEST
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jeez, wat can i say? i know exactly where you're coming from... this is so true, i can really relate to it...
thankyou for this it's realy good.... |
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Re: Falling Farther
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:13:27 AM AEST
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| your work is awesome i can feel your pain...but hang in there so many people feel just like you they need you to let them know they are not alone. You have talent |
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