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IF I WOULD OF BEEN THERE
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:35:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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IF I WOULD OF BEEN THERE
YOU'D STILL BE BREATHIN
ITS MESSED UP HOW THE PEOPLE I LOVE
KEEP ON LEAVING
BACK IN THE HOOD WE WERE UNITED AS ONE
BUT LITTLE BY LITTLE
WE WERE DIVIDED BY THE GUN
WE TRUSTED EACH OTHER
CAUSE WE WERE ALL WE HAD
BUT WE BOTH HAD SOMETHING IN COMMON
WE BOTH DIDNT HAVE OUR DADS
TEARS WERE DRAWN OUT EVERYTIME ONE OF US DIED
BUT NOBODY COULD UNDERSTAND WHY WE TRUELY CRIED
WE GREW APART AND DECIDED TO SUPPORT DIFFERENT COLORS
BUT WE EVEN LOOKED BEYOND THAT
CAUSE WE WERE STILL BROTHERS
PEOPLE GOT TO TRIPPIN
THEY STARTED PUTTING THINGS IN YOUR HEAD
AFTER ALL WE HAD BEEN THROUGH
HOW COULD MY OWN BROTHER WANT ME DEAD
YOU NEVER GOT A CHANCE TO SEE MY DAUGHTER
SHE WOULD OF LOVED YOU
YOU WOULD OF BEEN HER GODFATHER
BUT IT WAS TOO LATE
YOU WERE TAKEN FROM US
BEFORE SHE WAS EVER BORN
ITS MESSED UP HOW THEY DID YOU
ITS LIKE APART OF ME WAS TORN
I LOVE YOU BRO
AND NO MATTER WHAT
YOU STILL LIVE THROUGH ME
DEATH TOOK AWAY ALL MY LOVED ONES
BUT LEFT ME TO REMAIN FREE
IN MY HEART
YOUR DEATH WONT EVER SET RIGHT
I GUESS THATS WHY I BREAK MY OWN HEART
WITH THESE DEDICATED POEMS THAT I WRITE
IF I WOULD OF BEEN THERE
YOU'D STILL BE BREATHIN
ITS MESSED UP HOW THE PEOPLE I LOVE
KEEP ON LEAVING
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THUGGIN4REAL
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2005-03-21 13:35:39]
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Re: IF I WOULD OF BEEN THERE
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by ruthie1983 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 02:32:56 PM AEST
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| sorry about your tragedy buts its good u experiencing your emotion. Nice writing. |
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Re: IF I WOULD OF BEEN THERE
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:04:02 PM AEST
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This one brought tears to my eyes..
I'm really sorry about what you had to go through..and..I dont know if you're the kind of guy that talks about it, but I'm here if you ever need someone to talk to..no matter what, I'm here..
Lots of love..
Triste ojos |
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Re: IF I WOULD OF BEEN THERE
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:31:45 PM AEST
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*tear drop*
sorry bout ur bro i lost my bestfriend the same EXACT way keep it up
X0X0
BaBi |
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Re: IF I WOULD OF BEEN THERE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:45:57 PM AEST
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| This is an exelent write...heart tearing, but excelent. Lovely job. |
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