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On the Verge of Insanity
Contributed by
dvsnme816
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:35:20 PM in AEST
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He made many cruel and aweful mistakes,
so many wrong choices it's impossible to explain,
but a person does who they see everyday,
without a person to look up to the problems already made,
without a role model a child doesnt know right from wrong,
you expect them to know-but really his mind is lost,
never had someone to play baseball with and teach him rules,
as time progresses-he grows with no friends and got beat in school,
now he is too numb to care anymore-so he gets tortured,
anger builds up one day and starts swingin when they got him cornered,
now he is pushed to the edge-and figures this is better than getting beaten down,
inside he hears a demon sound-and nobody listened while he was screamin out,
he was ready to die-his father was never there but he never cried,
he held his pain inside-too aggressive to describe...
those feelings were mine...
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Re: On the Verge of Insanity
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by b_rand on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:39:37 PM AEST
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| wow, i can relate to this, somewhat ... i am curious as to the outcome of his sudden explosion? great job describing it though, you can definitely get a feel for what you went through at the end |
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Re: On the Verge of Insanity
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:27:23 AM AEST
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| thats something i can really relate to ..my dad is a complete and total jerk since i met him and other things ......i love it it speaks to me |
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