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I love you
Contributed by
PrincessMew
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:12:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I don’t know what it is
About you
I mean, it’s like I can’t stop thinking of you
You always linger in the back of my mind
When I think of you, there’s little sparks all through my skin
And when I see you, those sparks turn to fireworks
I glance over and see you smile
It just makes everything in the world seem right
There’s nothing else
No one else
But me, you, and a future
With every tear drop that falls for you
I hope that one day I’ll gather the strength
Gather the strength to tell you
To tell you those few small words that I’ve told you so many times before in my dreams
I pray that maybe someday, I, we can pull that dream into reality
Make it last for an eternity…
I love you.
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PrincessMew
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2005-03-21 13:12:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:19:02 PM AEST (User
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Mew, this is one of the best poems I've seen in a very long time. Very deep, very emotional. It's beautiful. Keep it up! |
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by dalamar on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 02:02:25 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful. I love it. I hope you can gather your strenght someday to tell the person or even show them this poem. |
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 09:48:07 PM AEST (User
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Great write.....wonderful imagery and a good flow. Thanks for sharing!
Carol |
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Re: I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by aprilrose on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:53:27 AM AEST (User
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again loved this poem too defenetly cant wait to see more great poems from you :) aprilrose |
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