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Break Me Down
Contributed by
dvsnme816
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:11:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We are apart because you keep bringing up the past,
and you always saying that you wanted another man,
we were happy at first-but it all lead to misery,
when you said you don't love me-my mind changed instantly,
you thought when you said this I'd have a broken heart,
I admit I cared but I'm not completely torn apart,
now that I don't like you-you claim to want me back,
and you're with another guy who clones me like a copycat,
always talking to me like "we'll be together"-it's not a prediction,
are you mad that I forgot all about your existance?,
what I did after you is turn my heart and love artificial,
you wanna hold me and make me happy-I just wanna talk a little,
because I am not gonna guide you to a relationship that I built,
and you're trying to bring back memories-asking me did I enjoy the silk,
I used to be happy with you when we were living in poverty,
I did everything for happiness-I paid the bills and bought your commodities,
looking back-I used to think hard and wonder where the happiness went,
I guess you didn't care before and forgot about me-I already did...
as this ends...
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2005-03-21 11:11:59]
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Re: Break Me Down
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by JacobsKK on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:16:00 AM AEST
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| Very sad. But a good write. You are quite an author. :-). |
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Re: Break Me Down
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by DoomedCuthulu on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:44:58 AM AEST
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| Agreed. A brilliant poem and a brilliant read. |
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