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Not For You
Contributed by
Blue
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Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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He showed his arm
All pink with torn flesh
Smiling at us as if to dull the
throbbing aching in our hearts and minds...
He merely offered the explaination
That he'd gotten mad at himself
For no wrongdoing
And we just stared at him
In pain.
I looked down at myself
Upon the scars freshly marked on my legs
Scars shaped like asteriks
Little lines up and down my arms.
Wanting nothing more than to slash.
in class I yelled at him
for cuttng himself
He told me I had no basis for complaint
Pointing at the scars I had
Don't you understand, I asked
It's right for me
And not for you.
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Blue
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2002-12-18 18:40:00]
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Re: Not For You
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:45:59 PM AEST
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This was a very powerful poem,Thank you for it,many will stop look and listen due to it.
Merry Christmas
and be well ,happy and safe.
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Re: Not For You
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by OreO on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 12:06:52 AM AEST
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This is so sad..and i've actually been in this situation before where i didnt want the other person cutting but it was ok for me to do it....thanks for sharing this one it brought back memories for me...
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Re: Not For You
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by Delusions on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 05:04:00 AM AEST
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yes i too have been in this type of situation before eccept it was omebody else saying that it wasnt right for me to cut but it was okay for them... it drove me mad!!! Keep it up!
~delusions~ |
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Re: Not For You
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by AllAlone on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 07:20:11 PM AEST
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wow this is a great read! i have a friend who had used to cut herself and i will definatly show her this...very powerful with an excellent point to make
~*AllAlone~* |
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Re: Not For You
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by Merd on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 04:33:47 PM AEST
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| This is wow, just because I've been through it with many friends, including you and Tim. It saddens me, everytime that something like cutting yourself happens. At least there are steps to getting better. |
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