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You killed yourself and didn't think of me.
Contributed by
concrete_rose
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:39:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You killed yourself and didn't think of me.
I can't blame you for that, and yet I do,
For now your pain becomes my legacy.
What agony impelled you not to be?
I loved you-wasn't that enough for you?
You killed yourself and didn't think of me,
Nor saw through my eyes what you made me see,
Nor cared about my life when yours was through.
And now your pain becomes my legacy,
And I must fight to keep my sanity,
For what you did defines what must be true:
You killed yourself and didn't think of me.
I cannot think you did it selfishly;
So great a sacrifice leaves nothing due.
But now your pain becomes my legacy,
And I must sail across that bitter sea
That leaves no trace of joy or residue.
You killed yourself and didn't think of me,
So now your pain becomes my legacy.
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2005-03-21 10:39:50]
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Re: You killed yourself and didn't think of me.
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by xtremcalibur on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:46:09 AM AEST
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| A sensative write. It is true you know, the part of who becomes a victim in the end. Moms, dads, brothers, sisters, grandparents ~ list goes on and nevermind the friends who believed in them when no one may have. Good write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: You killed yourself and didn't think of me.
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by SimplyMe on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:53:06 AM AEST
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I think XtremeCalibur said enough for everyone lol. I'm gonna Piggy-back them. Great write by the way.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: You killed yourself and didn't think of me.
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by echo03 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:24:53 PM AEST
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| That was great. I have always been on the other side.....thoughts of suicide have struck us all, but when you think of the concicences......is it really worth it? Very nice poem............when people cry they cry alone, when children die they die alone.....koren |
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