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Trying to be me
Contributed by
cathy
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:38:07 AM in AEST
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Im trying to be the daughter you wanted
me to be
but its kind of hard because i want to be me
why cant you see its up to me to be the kind
of person i want to be
I can only be me
thats who I am
If that dont work
I'll eat a can of spam
Im really quite great
a young kid with spunk
I know that becaouse
God didnt make any junk
I know you were young
and being a mother is hard
but i was just born
that's pretty young too
what could i do?
Copyright ©
cathy
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2005-03-21 09:38:07]
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Re: Trying to be me
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by b_rand on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:42:57 AM AEST
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| this is a very deep and emotional poem. i can see you've been through quite a lot. I wonder how old you are to understand such things... |
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Re: Trying to be me
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by inoc on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:59:20 PM AEST
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How true,,,,the last paragraph....yeh what could you do as a baby....
all the best in your future being YOU!
[ps. Yuck ....I hate spam!]
cheers!~ |
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Re: Trying to be me
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by arden on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:41:40 AM AEST
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i agree with what the others have said. it is indeed deep and emotional.
nice work.
Arden |
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