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Titbits
Contributed by
Ravi
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 07:15:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A roof that leaks,
a wife who gossips,
a neighbor who peeps,
a pet that bites,
they cause endless grief.
A curious servant,
a nymphomaniac wife,
a lazy brother,
a spendthrift son,
get rid of them.
Two wives at home,
a secretary who flirts,
a boss who grins,
a friend who flatters,
you will die soon.
Walk after dinner,
pay your loans,
remember some birthdays,
crush your enemies,
you will live long.
Copyright ©
Ravi
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2005-03-21 07:15:24]
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Re: Titbits
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:58:51 AM AEST
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Whoa... interesting poem. I like it though. Nice write...
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Re: Titbits
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by pastiche247 on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:40:36 PM AEST
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Real stream-of-consciousness writing!
Hmm - from "A roof that leaks," to "crush your enemies".'
You must have had a fascinating day for these thoughts to pop up in this order!
I like the idea of the first three stanzas pulling life down with its mundaneness as opposed to the final, decisive stanza.
I really enjoyed it! Something to get my teeth into - and really think about!
Best,
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