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Going Away Forever

Contributed by JasTrask_22 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:00:05 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Going Away Forever

I'll be away forever,
..Just waiting for you to come running to me..
I'm going away
..Forever

I can't stay in this place for too long.
I want to leave, and go somewhere.
But I'm not sure where I belong.
I just want you to be free from her care.

I want you to notice me in anyway.
I was waiting for my hug, but nothing came.
We even wore our pajama pants the same day.
I guess I am the one to blame.

But then I realized you weren't being yourself.
You didn't smile at me, like you always do.
The hug wasn't for me, but for someone else.
I might as well just give-up giving you clues.

You don't like me the way I like you.
And you probably never will.
I want you to see my point of view.
You heal me in many ways when I'm ill.

Your smile lights the path in my way.
And don't get me started explaining your eyes.
I can see them from a mile and a half away.
These two things just get me so mesmerized.

Soo I don’t know what I’m supposed to do.
Should I stay or should I go?
I think i’m going to run away from you.
I won’t go fast, I will run slow.

Yes, that’s where I’ll go..
Because I’m running away from you..
Im Going away...
Forever...

Copyright Â© JasTrask_22 ... [ 2005-03-20 20:00:05]
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Re: Going Away Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:29:31 PM AEST
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I liked your writeing very much...somone you cant have but, you want...interesting i loved the ending the last stanza was amazing ...thanks ~~Crystal~~

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