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Feel My Pain

Contributed by allforyou on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:21:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The black spots in their eyes scatter as I stare into them,
and only the hate lingers.
They absorb all of the blame I send rolling, shooting,
from my fingers.

Grasping their minds in hand I cover them in filth,
nothing pure remains.
They shutter from the light and dwell in the night,
I've transferred my pain.

My lips scream silent commands into their ears,
and they obey.
They've become slaves to me, to my every word,
to my game.

I've stolen their smiles and happy memories,
and killed their souls.
For only anguish shall ring in their mind,
and silently lull.

I will deliver them from this place and make them evil,
dark like me.
Of course its blind to them my true motive,
they cannot see.

The hatred, the darkness that followed when I walk,
trails behind them.
So if you like the depths of Hell come as you are and,
leave as I am.

Copyright © allforyou ... [ 2005-03-20 19:21:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Feel My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:28:38 AM AEST
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::applauds:: wonderful and terrific. im glad i read this one. i loved it. i especially couldnt help but like the ending. your last line is the best line ive read in quite a long time. i can feel the pain =]

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