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Why Can't You Just Deal?
Contributed by
Lovely_4_Steve
on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:33:23 PM in AEST
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Why is it so hard for you to deal with something so simple?
Why can't you just deal, and live your life?
Why do you get so angry and uncomfertable around me?
Why can't I just act like my-self around you?
This putting on a show, is getting to old.
I need to live my life.
Not yours.
Why can't you just get on and live with everything that happens?
Why do you dweal on the past?
Letting your future fly past?
Why can't you be real?
Why are you so fake?
Why can't you just deal.
And let me live my life?
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Lovely_4_Steve
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2005-03-20 17:33:23]
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Re: Why Can't You Just Deal?
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by DoomedCuthulu on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:48:29 PM AEST
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It's not too short- it has the perfect language and structure. The length doesnt matter.
It's great.
My poems are long enough for everyone else anyway. |
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Re: Why Can't You Just Deal?
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by runaway0516 on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 04:50:42 PM AEST
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| well..that sums up how i feel in a nutshell,...great write...nice poem...keep writing |
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