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Contributed by DoomedCuthulu on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

7 - No words to speak
I wish I knew my name
I never know the words to say
When you say you love me

6 - No strength to move
My will left too long ago
My mind is numbed
Your eternal slave

5 - No thoughts that thrive
Except of being yours
That too will soon be gone
Because you are moving on

4 - No light eternal
You've been teaching me lies
There's no way out
Of this foolish game

3 - No prayers to utter
I think my god is dead
My bucket of faith was drained away
With every word you said

2 - Too wise to trust
I've learned to define your lies
When you stay you still love me
You're saying, go away.

1 - No option but to live
You're too spiteful to let me go
I wish you'd learn you're not the one
But I've sworn fealty now.

0 - No balm that soothes like death
Still you're stuck within my head
Foolishly I love you still
This pain is a knife, made of dread.

Copyright © DoomedCuthulu ... [ 2005-03-20 17:24:01]
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Re: Countdown (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:08:46 PM AEST
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Great write. What was it you were counting down to though? death?

--Kara

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