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I try to..
Contributed by
Jen54
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No ones near to hear her cry.
No ones close to see her die.
Everyone sees her as she lies.
Everyone's there to watch her struggle to fly.
No ones around and I wonder why.
So sick of being alone as I try to say good-bye
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Jen54
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2005-03-20 16:33:17]
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Re: I try to..
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:15:43 PM AEST
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Jen, if you are a spiritual person, then you know you are never alone. Yes, we can still feel the need for someone to relate to that can understand. Reaching out with your poetry and beautiful words is a good way to do that.
Thanks for sharing
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Re: I try to..
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 03:16:18 PM AEST
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| good write,more detail needed,but i got the message,and thats what counts,keep it up |
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Re: I try to..
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 10:17:40 PM AEST
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| you are never alone |
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