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My Black Heart
Contributed by
Katie2008
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:27:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The blood that pours from my veins
Screams out your name
And this is what you've done to me
Made me trust you
Made me love you
As hard as I try I can't drink away your memory
Or sleep away my pain
Memories of you and I
Are burning through my mind
And as much as I wish it wasn't true
My black heart still beats and bleeds
For you
Copyright ©
Katie2008
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2005-03-20 16:27:11]
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Re: My Black Heart
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by allforyou on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:27:39 PM AEST
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"As hard as I try I can't drink away your memory"
I love that part. It describes what I'm going through right now. Amazing write.
--Kara |
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Re: My Black Heart
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:46:06 PM AEST
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This is very strong and straight from the heart
an effective peice of writting felt the vibes
from it . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My Black Heart
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:47:35 PM AEST
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This is very strong and straight from the heart
an effective peice of writting felt the vibes
from it . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My Black Heart
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:33:48 AM AEST
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What an fantastic poem. I can so relate to this. Well done and thanks for posting.
Jane |
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Re: My Black Heart
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by SimplyMe on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:41:48 AM AEST
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Short and straight to the point. Well done. i loved this Stanza
"As hard as i try i can't drink away your memory"
That reminds me of "Whiskey Lullaby" By Brad Paisely. Great song..makes me cry. The video makes me cry worse. Anyways now i'm rambling. Gret write.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: My Black Heart
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by DirtyFool on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:22:15 PM AEST
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| I LOVE IT!!! It's amazing!! |
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Re: My Black Heart
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by justjonesy on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:46:58 AM AEST
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| I really liked this one....I love the bitter regret in this poem...very dark...great job |
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