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Tired Eyes
Contributed by
neveryours
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 03:42:55 PM in AEST
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Tired Eyes
Intensified lights burn like truth
This gaze, perspective
Glazed like a hot summer day
Blinking away desert dry emotion
Sand scratching, blurring honesty
Until I can't see you anymore
Searing, and my desire to sleep
Overwhelms your requests to stay
The oasis that is my dream, calm and cool
Beckoning in wet undertones, softly,
Tenderly calling
I want to remain, to see
This through, but I am lost
And I know that even hope won't save these
Last blinking burning desires.
Copyright ©
neveryours
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2005-03-20 15:42:55]
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Re: Tired Eyes
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by b_rand on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 03:52:34 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write... |
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Re: Tired Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:33:35 AM AEST
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| tired eyes have seen much in their time, and most times, still blind. excellent poem. i especially liked the ending and trasition to it. |
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Re: Tired Eyes
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:53:10 AM AEST
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Ohh i know what you mean LOL. I have tired eyes as well.
On a lighter note i thought this was very nicely writen. So thanks for posting it.
Jane |
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