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My World
Contributed by
Missy_Kahnt
on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 03:09:11 PM in AEST
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Tears that flow
From my dry eyes
Mean the world to me
Can you hear the cries
Blood that was shed
From His holy face
Means the world to me
Can you see the race
Screams that are heard
From on the street
Mean the world to me
Can you hear the feet
Poundings that are witnessed
Everywhere
Mean the world to me
Can you see out there
Silent nights
Rarely heard
Mean the world to me
God has spoken His word
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2005-03-20 15:09:11]
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Re: My World
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 03:43:38 AM AEST
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| a deep and touching write. Expressed so well. A truly great write. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: My World
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:29:24 PM AEST
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Well done! Simple, and perhaps you're somewhat new to writing poetry(?), but the style here is very lyrical, and this is portrayed beautifully. Bravo!
Andrew |
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