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Glimmer
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
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Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
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The faint ,pallid shadow
vacuous and expansive of
a figure
just like an unfractured disused plot
That shadow
contracteed right up at a close conjuncture to the stolid wall
Unaturally bereft of sensible convention and consignment ,
proximity wise.
But all is fading, being implored
compromising slightly by vacilliting a little undulating
yet
searing away like weather consumnated paint
A careening downhill deranged condition rupturing like drought pillaged earth .
Besotted, downtrodden
Just like the mermaid's callously spurned advances, swimming ,composedly into oblivion.
Hysteria pealing through inertia
negating the ethereal recessess of the sea
gnarled by odious sea weed
Feeling her own insignia a derogative,
a gratuitous revelation of skin
And farewelll now to these frugal elements
Waver till you break
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
... [
2002-12-18 11:30:00]
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Re: Glimmer
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 05:52:36 PM AEST
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All i can say is wow....very pretty..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Glimmer
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:04:34 AM AEST
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Hi my Singaporean neighbour. For your info, I'm a Malaysian here, probably the ony one, haha.
Anyway, you sure did paint a good picture by using poetry. Keep it up pal. I like the way you use with your words. Simply awesome! |
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