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Love Defined
Contributed by
BENiAM
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:54:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love is the insanity that you are choked with!
While sense is withheld and chaos roams the mind.
When the heart becomes dunce, and only knows one subject.
Yet at one time all the love songs make sense,
And all of a sudden you know what they meant
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BENiAM
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2005-03-20 01:54:02]
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Re: Love Defined
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by electrique_poet on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:03:58 AM AEST
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this is very nice, short but captures the feeling of being in love
i like the last two lines, a great end
... in words electrique |
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Re: Love Defined
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:14:37 AM AEST
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| Short, simple and sweet. A great piece of poetry. Capturing the beauty of love in so little words is absolutely fantastic. A pleasant and delightful read. Well done |
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Re: Love Defined
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by Kie on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:04:47 PM AEST
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"Yet at one time all the love songs make sense,
And all of a sudden you know what they meant"
So true so true. You can't fully understand the lyrics of a love song if you haven't experienced it. Appreciate it maybe, long for it of course but when you are there, it really hits home.
A very enjoyable poem.
Kie
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Re: Love Defined
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by jace on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 11:52:46 AM AEST
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| kinda chokes ya as you read it well done beniam |
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