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An infinite blue
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:01:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A crowning smile;
A porcelain sigh;
A dying, dead breath
naked on the floor.
Deep purple, pink,
the softest pink
nipples
coupled breasts
and grass stained jeans.
Brown eyes in blue-
It is an infinite blue.
In the rain
people run,
franticly seeking shelter.
This is love:
the kind moment
after the rain.
I look at my face
seeing so much change
and I am afraid.
Not of this passing hour;
Not of death or pain;
That which is not in my power,
but of the reflection
that cannot yet be seen.
Black dogs
howl
dead in the doorway.
A red opaque mat;
A simple smile;
Christmas on a full night,
screaming through the screen door.
A bleak and burning night.
(Burning eyes on quiet light, burning to break through!)
Four men stare into each other.
Another man, hidden behind a door,
stares at the others.
Gray green gerbils devour one another.
Flesh on flesh the pale sands
An autumn sky on Sunday
A dead mans lips
The infantile stars above your brow.
We found a calm sea,
beginning to imagine
how we were very similar.
Suddenly the sky blushed
a frightening gray
and the waves bore away
Our bones became flush,
bright white and sand.
It is not in the darkest hour
that i feel the most pain,
nor is it in the brightest day
that I am overwhelmed,
but in the quiet...
Tiny flakes of snow,
blue.
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2005-03-20 01:01:57]
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Re: An infinite blue
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by electrique_poet on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:53:17 AM AEST
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this is a great write, it really draws you in
and the various fragments seem to create a cohesive picture, in my mind at least
anyway, i enjoyed your words
... in words electrique
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Re: An infinite blue
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:03:41 AM AEST
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Sounds to me like heaven rite here on Planet Earth. Course any thing that has to do with Stars always infatuates me. Star City being where I was raised.
A masterpeice of heaven right here on Planet Earth.
This write jus shoots of up in space but all need to go there many times for rejuvination!
There jus aren't any words in my vocabalary that can do this one justice but I'll give ya the bigest one I know, suppercallafradualistexpialadoshus,
huggs,
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