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Not Wanted
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:00:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Not Wanted
Shards of water cascade
Down reflections of hate.
Shards of glass procreate
The wanton blood of rage.
The emotions are serrated
By hopes that are decimated.
The dreams are desecrated,
Even when death is belated.
Disbelief slowly fills the mind,
And reassurance is hard to find.
Never to be loved in this life
And to die empty inside.
The life once had is shattered
By everything that mattered...
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essentially9
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2005-03-20 00:00:34]
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Re: Not Wanted
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:11:16 AM AEST
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Yes..Jen, I love this work of art..I can relate..and you always pull through in amazing me...=]
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Re: Not Wanted
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:24:43 AM AEST
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| Very emotional, beautifully expressed. |
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Re: Not Wanted
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:04:50 AM AEST
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this is beautiful and very well expressed you can feel the pain in this.. awesome job.. I can definately relate.. i love the last line especially .. awesome
JENNI |
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Re: Not Wanted
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:32:01 AM AEST
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Gosh Jen... Do you ever write bad poems?
I'm thinking not.
*hugs* You can pull through sweetie, you are most certainly wanted here; you and your fabulous poetry.
I adore the last two lines in this. In my opinion, the poem would not be right without them.
Great write my friend,
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Not Wanted
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by Pats4eva7 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:16:34 PM AEST
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And you say I have talent...lol this was AMAZING! You truly have a gift for writing, the way you put your words together, they have such ryhthm and such a beautiful flow. The words that you choose truly pick at my brain and make me think...keep writing, i'll keep reading!
~*~melyssa~*~ |
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Re: Not Wanted
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:19:13 PM AEST
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A VERY LOVELY POEM VERY TOUCHING . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: Not Wanted
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 02:22:29 AM AEST
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"Never to be loved in this life..And to die empty inside"..how sad! very exquisitely written. venkat
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Re: Not Wanted
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:09:55 AM AEST
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Jen i have to agree with Phil on this, have you ever writen anything bad?
Cause every poem i read of yours is amazing, it's totally outstanding LOL.
Great poems from an outstanding poet.
Jane |
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Re: Not Wanted
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:43:07 AM AEST
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wow!
Poerfully sad..I sure hope this isn't about you.
Otherwise well done heer, your lines have a bluntness to them and yet a hint of cryptic, nice blend. |
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