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Insanely Running
Contributed by
Alina
on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:52:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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running from life
from a life on the run
these shoes can't continue
their colors no fun
they don't shine, nor do they sparkle
they can't run another mile
because their worn and their torn
and they refuse to smile
these shoes could tell you a story
of alleys in which they've lived
of crack whore beds
and needle dreams
of nothing left to give
their falling apart
ripping at the seems
because the girl who wears these shoes
can't stop her whore schemes
the sex was never welcomed nor good
and the drugs don't last that long
and now these shoes have stopped
running
Running from Life
From a Life on an Insane Run
Copyright ©
Alina
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2005-03-19 23:52:29]
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Re: Insanely Running
(User Rating: 1 )
by TinkerHell on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:19:43 PM AEST
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Comments are open for those to critic the content of the poem, not the author's life. Thanks, but I didn't ask for your opinion about my family issues...so please don't judge like you know the situation. Also, not that it matters, if you read my introductory to the poem, you would see that I said "one point in my life", refering to past tense. I don't feel that way anymore, and even if I did, it isn't your place to tell me to get over it. Alright, thank you.
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Re: Insanely Running
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:24:02 PM AEST
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| This is good, i mean goooood, i like it, i like what you've done with the ryhme :) nice one! |
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