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Empty Dreams
Contributed by
waos
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:42:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You're inhabiting my dreams
with quiet hesitance,
but I know in life you're gone,
having left me with no response.
Dream you speak to me
in crowded places, night after night.
I wake to crashed hope,
to dried tears in eyes not quite bright.
Memories once warm and laughing
now doused in bitter rain.
Lost and alone I stagger through
the jostling bodies in pain.
Dream you speak to me,
but wake to eyes flitting away,
to empty seats and cold stares,
to broken promises to stay.
Present flew away on the raven's wing
and the unicorns' light can't shine;
since that day we ended
I've only had myself to redefine.
Come back to me,
in more than just my dreams.
Come back to me,
or leave me mired forever in these dreams.
~Waos - for the one who knew me best~
Copyright ©
waos
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Re: Empty Dreams
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:30:46 AM AEST
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Well this one is very enchanting
This one is very enchanting.......................1
A masterpeice of strong will...
Great work with the words.
Huggs,
emy
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Re: Empty Dreams
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:15:40 PM AEST
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THIS IS SAD AND BEAUTIFUL AT THE SAME TIME A VERY NICE PEICE OR WRITTING
I WISH U WELL . . .
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Re: Empty Dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:40:13 AM AEST
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| kara, this was amazing. you brought me back to the same pain that ive experienced so many times before....seems like im never out of it, but im just getting more numb to it.... |
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Re: Empty Dreams
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:10:28 AM AEST
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Kara this was such a sad write, i hope all will be back to normal soon.
Jane |
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Re: Empty Dreams
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:27:42 PM AEST
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beautiful, haunting, and honest. I think even
you would be hard pressed to right
something better than this. Thanks for
sharing this.
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Re: Empty Dreams
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:37:00 PM AEST
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bloody hell this was dark - i would say i've read about 30 poems from different authors tonight and yours is the one i have enjoyed the most - this was a powerful and exceptional write!
well done!!.. |
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