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(ending)
Contributed by
blackrose233
on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:14:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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(ending)
A fear
A sound
Your best friend falls to the ground
You just stand
You just stare
Crimson blood flows from her hair
She fades away
You don’t know what to say
You stare
You stay
Watching her eyes fade fast away there’s nothing you can do to make her stay
Another sound comes from behind
But this time for you
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blackrose233
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2005-03-19 22:14:46]
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Re: (ending)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:02:55 PM AEST
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| you have fantastic rhythmn. i suggest song writing for you =] |
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Re: (ending)
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:14:10 AM AEST
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| wow, NICE! |
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Re: (ending)
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by Lips on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 06:10:01 AM AEST
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| Simple but very effective and easily visualised! |
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