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Lost
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 07:27:07 PM in AEST
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Give it to me,
it's what i want.
It fills my mind,
My dreams it haunts.
Shut your mouth,
silence your pleas.
Close your eyes,
get down on your knees.
Grovel before me,
for it will be mine.
For today,
and all of time.
You'll never stop me,
you'll never win.
I am a part of you,
locked within.
Now hand it over,
it won't be long.
Soon you'll be,
as you belong.
Struggle and fight,
you'll not beat me.
I'll be the victor,
just wait and see.
I'm sick of your games,
i'll not play anymore.
The battles are over,
and i've won this war.
Blood falls down,
from your eyes,
As you look up,
and realize.
That it's gone,
it belongs to me.
You have just lost,
your sanity.
Copyright ©
Quilted_rag_doll
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2005-03-19 19:27:07]
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 07:47:58 PM AEST
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| so sad and creepy.goodly written tho. |
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Re: Lost
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by Live2Die on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:07:30 PM AEST
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| One word : Awesome. |
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Re: Lost
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by Simmy on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 09:19:55 PM AEST
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its cute
and i like it
but i dont understand
some rhymes some doesnt
but i like wat it means
one thing to say:: kickass!! |
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Re: Lost
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by jthzero on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:11:40 PM AEST
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if i had a nickle for every time i felt like that i would have a lot! of money
good poem |
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Re: Lost
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 07:51:31 PM AEST
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@%$*)&^!#+_-=.?/""':;I lost my sanity.
Wonderfuly done.:( :) I think.I thunk.
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